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in fact your walking on one point...
That's no real movement... I think you should let one leg step foreward and then the rest of the body must move towards the point of the leg. Then it looks like real walking... ya know what I want to tell you? It's just help, i don't want to insult you. and the rest (shape, coloring) looks really good to me. although that little stripes on your cheeks are making me wonder... you look like if you have to sleep the next secounds. And I think that the left eye should move one pix to the right... just a feeling of mine. So that was enough from critizising. xD cya, Rian. -- Take your wings and fly off. ------------------------------------------------- See also my comic series: ~Noes-And-Goes No because i don't want to acctually be moving off the avatar, it's not easy to move with no background, but besides it was just practice for the movement of certain parts of the pixel art
-- Sini: Ridding your computers of zombies since 1990 Avatar: By teh awesome =Marc-pHX ah okay
then everything is alright x) may I introduce you to see my latest image? I'm very proud of it... It's a photomanipulationimage... cya -- Take your wings and fly off. ------------------------------------------------- See also my comic series: ~Noes-And-Goes thinking logically, you are right if i was aiming for looking like i was acctually moving i'd have to have put alot more thought into the process x3
-- Sini: Ridding your computers of zombies since 1990 Avatar: By teh awesome =Marc-pHX nah... you're good, i never doubt that xD
just want to give a good comment... that's what I always want to do... being a good critiziser. -- Take your wings and fly off. ------------------------------------------------- See also my comic series: ~Noes-And-Goes It was a great comment
I completely forgot about the eyes, good job you mentioned it, though i forgot to save the psd file to change it x3 -- Sini: Ridding your computers of zombies since 1990 Avatar: By teh awesome =Marc-pHX ah nooooo >.<
well.. at least pixel art has just a few pixel... thinking of a big image like my last one... v.v 2 hours of work in the ass... But thank you, I'll give my best! -- Take your wings and fly off. ------------------------------------------------- See also my comic series: ~Noes-And-Goes |
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